100 WC week 22 Trapped by Krzysztof

“OPEN! Please. I’ll do whatever I need to. PLEASE! OPEN IT! ”

Vinegar poured in the room in big drops. The Voice announced, ” Give up the money or die, Jim.”

There was no chance of surviving, the vinegar was too sharp. The  hatch was closed for ages and still vinegar poured in .

“What’s your choice Jim?  See your family again or die?”

Vinegar was up to his shoulders  when he heard steps. Then someone shouted, “CAN YOU HEAR ME ?”


The hatch opened and Jim was saved.