100 WC. WK 16 THE LIGHT By Krzysztof

The light blinded him.

“WHO ARE YOU? WHY ARE YOU HERE?!”

The boy looked up at the torch, covering his eyes.

” I wanted a short break from the journey to find my uncle.”

“Where do you come from? ”

“From far away, 30 km away.”

The farmer gazed at him and thought what to do.

Finally he replied, “Come on, you get a bed, something to eat and new clothes.”

The boy got up slowly, got his bag and followed the man to the cottage. He looked at the stars , walked in…

2 thoughts on “100 WC. WK 16 THE LIGHT By Krzysztof”

  1. Hi Krzysztof,
    I really enjoyed your story this week. It made me think of a World War II. Perhaps the character sought refuge in the countryside. I’d definitely like to read more of this story.
    Keep up the great writing.
    Ms Brennock
    Dublin
    https://msbrennocksclass.100wc.net/

  2. Hello Kryztof, the opening of your story is really engaging. The two questions create mystery so that the reader wants to read on to find out what will happen. The dialogue between the two characters was a good idea too. Maybe you might have considered some statements explaining how the dialogue was uttered…”the boy stammered”,”the farmer demanded” but I think you have done a great job.

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