In the beginning it was all fine. Now I’m terrified let me explain. Earlier today me and my friend Shane were helping my Grandpa clear out his attic. There was a box saying “Do not touch.” I had asked my Grandpa about it before but he always said nothing. When he went to make some tea I daringly decided to open it. I saw a metal thing. I picked it up. It spoke “Portal gun deployed” in a kind of robot voice. “Portal gun! “Cool!” Shane and I were amazed. I held it for a moment. I hesitated to pull the trigger. I was too scared to do it. I decided I might as well so I shot it at the floor. I called Grandpa. He said angrily,”Why did you touch it?” I said “Can we please go somewhere?” He said ” Alright” so we jumped in. We ended up in this creepy jungle. I could hear weird sounds and monkeys shouting. I was terrified .Next thing I heard a roar. Cheetahs!! “Run” I was even more terrified. I tripped and couldn’t get up. My Grandpa and Shane got me out just before the cheetah jumped. My Grandpa said “That was the last bullet.” “Uh oh”. Next thing a guy swung down from a tree and said ” I have one!” We were saved.
In the end we escaped.
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