100wc by Sean O S

We were going very fast when… boom!!! When I woke up I was in hospital. I didn’t know what had happened. The doctor told me what had happened. My leg was broken and one of my ribs was too. I asked where my mom and dad were but they didn’t tell me. Days passed and I was still in hospital. One day a nurse called Catherine came over to me and said that I would be able to go home in the next few days. So  two days passed and my mom and dad were in casts. We were driven home by our granny and grandad. A couple of weeks later all of us were better.

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  1. Hi Sean,
    What a terrible thing to happen! What caused the crash? It’s a relief that everyone recovered at the end. You’ve used punctuation well to make the story more exciting and your spelling is all accurate too- well done!
    Thanks for taking part in 100WC this week.
    Hannah (Team 100) -Birmingham, UK

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