100wc by Sean O S

We were going very fast when… boom!!! When I woke up I was in hospital. I didn’t know what had happened. The doctor told me what had happened. My leg was broken and one of my ribs was too. I asked where my mom and dad were but they didn’t tell me. Days passed and I was still in hospital. One day a nurse called Catherine came over to me and said that I would be able to go home in the next few days. So¬† two days passed and my mom and dad were in casts. We were driven home by our granny and grandad. A couple of weeks later all of us were better.

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  1. Hi Sean,
    What a terrible thing to happen! What caused the crash? It’s a relief that everyone recovered at the end. You’ve used punctuation well to make the story more exciting and your spelling is all accurate too- well done!
    Thanks for taking part in 100WC this week.
    Hannah (Team 100) -Birmingham, UK

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