Bad Police Day by Oisin

I work as a police man and I got a report of a robbery. There were police cars sent and I got into the helicopter but some thing was wrong and when it just wouldn’t take off,  it seemed like it was over but I couldn’t give up. I looked at the fuel, the engine and everything. I couldn’t find the problem.

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  1. What an exciting start to your story Oisin. I would love to learn to fly a helicopter although I bet it’s a bit trickier than learning to drive a car! Your character seems to have the right fault-finding skills, but what do you think his next step would have been? (You’ve got 38 words left to play with if you need them)
    Well done and keep rising to the Challenge.

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