ESCAPE ROOM wk#17 by Ronan

Tom, Selma, Ben and Ethan were going to an escape room. Ethan had won a prize to go with 3 friends. On Saturday, 19th of January, the four children went off to the warehouse full of different escape rooms. Ethan’s dad, John, drove them all there. They were asked at the front counter what theme of room they would like. They agreed on the basic murder mystery. Half way through the hour they had, Selma went to the fake fire place, looking for clues. Suddenly there was a scream. Selma was gone. But how could she just disappear like that?

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  1. Hi Ronan, great story I love the surprise ending, wow! Will the rest of you escape or just disappear? You have used your punctuation very well and this helps the flow and the structure of your story, well done.

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