The day Someone Bought Me By Charlie Barry

The day had come! Somebody had finally bought me! Soon I would be out of this sweltering hot packet and into fresh air and light! Suddenly I heard a loud rumble and I was jolted back. I was excited as we drove around the bumpy road. So bumpy that someone dropped me and I fell out of the car. I got sick and dizzy as I flew through the air. Then my packet hit a hard surface and ripped open. I never expected things to go like this. I walked awkwardly out of the ripped packet. Then I saw these red bugs all around me. A chill went down my spine.

2 thoughts on “The day Someone Bought Me By Charlie Barry”

  1. Excellent Work Charlie!
    I love the original idea of writing the piece as a piece of Lego in a shop waiting to be bought. I wonder if toys really feel that need and urgency of waiting to be bought?
    You made good use of words like jolted, rumble and awkwardly, they add to the richness of your piece.
    Keep up the great work!
    Ciara (Team 100)

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