Three Statues week 4 by Alan

One day I took a walk to a park called Noms Park. And what I saw was three statues .One looked like a ram and the second one looked like a horse and the third one looked like a bull. I saw a wizard beside them and he was the one to make the statues. I asked him did he do that? And he said yes! I asked him does he hate animals ? He didn’t answer. Once I blinked he was gone in 0.1 seconds. I was amazed . Afterwards I took a walk in the park and went home.

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  1. Hi Alan,
    Great story! I like your idea that a wizard created the statues. Why did you think he hated animals from the statues? I like you use of shorter sentences following long ones- it was very effective. Keep up the good work.
    Michael (Team 100wc), Coventry, UK

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