week 19 The Endless Terror by Julius.

“Run you fools!” the captain shouted in a frightened voice. We ran quickly past the burning vehicles but the smell of gas was too much and I could no longer breathe properly.

But I didn’t have much choice and carried on running. A while later we came to the factory where we first landed for the mission .

We went inside and hid behind the boxes and waited for the attack. We did not know what it was or where it was from but we knew where it was going .

Suddenly it came down the drainpipe and we braced ourselves for what was coming.

 

One thought on “week 19 The Endless Terror by Julius.”

  1. Hi Julius,

    I enjoyed reading your story this week but your use of imagery made me feel a bit scared! I could really imagine the burning vehicles and the smell of gas, and the feeling of trepidation whilst waiting behind the boxes for whatever it was to come down the drainpipe. You were very successful at creating a cliffhanger ending!

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