Week 29 by Alex

Bang – the bomb went off and now it was time for the real challenge. Beefy Keefy ran in and frantically began shouting orders. I was part of the drilling team. I got shouted at for being late with the drill  -my face went crimson red with same.

The drill started up and the mist and dust made it look almost like a grave yard  – finally, the robbery was over  -it was a great success with a lot of money taken from the bank. We had a healthy profit to go into hiding and let the heat go away.

One thought on “Week 29 by Alex”

  1. Hi Alex,
    I really enjoyed reading your story this week. Well done!
    I like how you started with onomatopoeia – it aroused my interest straight away and I wanted to find out what was going on.
    Keep up the great work.
    Mrs Boyce

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