Week 29 By Michael

Boom! Crash!

I had to leave the city immediately. I was in grave danger. I frantically packed my crimson bag and left. I shouted for help but nobody seemed to hear me. It was a very misty day so I put on my coat. I ran for what felt like an hour to look for safety.

I reached an old abandoned cottage and decided to stay there for the night. A few minutes later a man entered the cottage. He took out a weapon and threatened me with it.

One thought on “Week 29 By Michael”

  1. Hi Michael, I really like how you used your word choice, it just blew my mind! I didn’t even realize that you can write something else with does words! Did you know that our class actually made the 5 words? A connection that I have with your writing is that I made action/horrer story just like you. One thing you can improve right is that you should have 100 words because you only have 89.

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