WEEK 29 ESCAPE BY Dan

It was a misty ,dull night and I was standing inside a grave yard praying for my dead blood relatives, when I suddenly saw a blacked out figure standing in the corner. As soon as I finished praying  I thought that it would be a good idea to go over and confront whoever was constantly staring at me.

Before I could move an inch, this crimson faced woman shouted that I wouldn’t be going anywhere. I immediately tuned around to run but all my exits were blocked besides one, I frantically ran and ran… to anywhere but here.

 

3 thoughts on “WEEK 29 ESCAPE BY Dan”

  1. OMG This is the best story ever!!!
    Its amazing!
    *Lots of great adjectives.
    *Good vocabulary.
    Well done! 🙂

  2. Hi Dan,
    I really like your post. I think you did good word choices and vocab. But I really don’t get the last part of you story next time leave room to finish. Also you need to bold your 5 words. Oh and I love the main idea in your story!!!

  3. Hi Dan,
    I like how you incorporated the five words, but you should have bolded them. I also appreciate that you had two paragraphs instead of one. Keep on writing and keep up the good work!

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