Week 31 I Will Never go to That House Again!!! By Danny

It was 5 o clock on the 31st of October. My two friends, John and Tom, came over to go Trick or Treating. We went down Wall Street to Mr and Mrs Walsh’s house first as we knew them very well and they gave children more than a fair amount of Candy.

As the night came to a close, we skedaddled  down O Brien Street to Mr George’s house. When we came to the gate we noticed there was a slight breeze blowing the trees in his garden and from my point of view it looked as if it was haunted.

We walked along the dreadful, rocky pathway when out of the house we heard a scream and that was the last time I went Trick or Treating to Mr George’s house.

P.S. I never saw Mr George AGAIN!!!

One thought on “Week 31 I Will Never go to That House Again!!! By Danny”

  1. Hi Danny,
    Thanks for doing the 100 Word Challenge this week. I look forward to your stories. This one was a real thriller! I enjoyed the verb ‘skedaddled’ and the adjectives ‘dreadful’ and ‘rocky’. I wonder what became of Mr George? It’s not looking good for him!
    Keep up the good work.
    Kind regards,
    Mrs O Sullivan.

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