Week 33 Jacob’s Demise: by Tadhg

Jack was happy. He could finally do what he’d been waiting 10 long years to do . Simon Jacobs was his neighbour. He was a grumpy old man. He went missing a while ago. Jack was ready to climb the wall into Simon’s backyard. For years he lost balls, kites and a bike (don’t ask!) . Jack climbed the wall and spotted a massive black hole that filled up most of the lawn. Jack looked down the massive hole and saw Jacob. He was skin and bone. There was something behind him. It was moving towards him. Jacob screamed and was dragged away by the vicious beast. The deafening screams echoed through the cold night. Jack cried himself to sleep. 

One thought on “Week 33 Jacob’s Demise: by Tadhg”

  1. Hi Tadhg,
    First of all: What a great title!
    ‘He was skin and bone.’ This is great writing as it conjures up a visual image for me.
    Poor Jack will have nightmares after witnessing such a gruesome event.
    Great work, Tadhg. Keep it up.
    Mrs O Sullivan.

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