Week 33 The Campsite by Matthew D

My friends and I were going camping in the local camping site . We had it all planned out. It was going to be the best night of our lives. We set up the tent and put the barbecue on. We were having a midnight feast when we heard  footsteps. We all ran as fast as the wind. My friend and I hid in a cave. We heard screams. The screams grew louder and louder. The deafening screams echoed through the cold night and into the early morning. Then a shadow appeared. My  friend and I backed away and then BOOM!

One thought on “Week 33 The Campsite by Matthew D”

  1. Hi Matthew,
    Well done. I loved your story. I like the way you extended the sentence by adding ‘into the early morning’. That shadow is sounds very sinister! Keep up the great writing.
    Mrs O Sullivan.

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