Week 33 The Deep Dark Woods by Danny

It was just coming up to 10 o clock on Saturday evening when I went out to lock my dog Bella into her kennel for the night. I noticed that she wasn’t there. I called her name but there was no sign of her.

I went into the wood next to my house calling her name. |Suddenly the deafening screams echoed through the cold night. I ran as fast as my legs would carry me hoping no one was following me. As I was running something tugged on my pants and there was Bella running along side me and she looked as frightened as I felt.

2 thoughts on “Week 33 The Deep Dark Woods by Danny”

  1. Hi Danny,
    I love the way Bella made her first appearance in the 100 Word Challenge! I’m so glad you found her safe and sound if rather frightened. Your writing is getting better every week Danny and I look forward to your stories. Well done.
    Mrs O Sullivan.

  2. Hi Danny, what a great story. I love dogs and Bella seems just fantastic. It is so typical that the dog would be there when she was needed. I love how you started your story quite calmly; just doing what you would normally do then turned the story around. As a reader I was so concerned about Bella and then you added the screams and that just heightened the tension. It was very clever. Loved the image of Bella tugging on the trousers. Well done.

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