Week 6: Dastardly Day By Naglis

Slowly, I raised the bottle to my lips and took a sip sparingly. Wearily. I crawled dejectedly across the arid, desiccated wasteland. My heart was rapidly thumping inside me like a drum. The sweat trickling off my forehead was like a stream. My legs felt like they were about to flop onto the desolate ground. I was about to give up until I saw it. My eyes darted from one side to the other like a meteor. “The Treasure!” I sighed. Desperately, I reached down and it was heavier than I expected. I could see the shadow of a man with a cowboy hat. “You led me right to it!”…

One thought on “Week 6: Dastardly Day By Naglis”

  1. Well done Naglis.
    I loved how you built up the tension.
    I was so excited that you had found the treasure but wasn’t expecting the twist in the ending.
    Another great story.
    Mrs Boyce

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