Week 6 Robbery By Ciarán

“Stop Criminal…..!”

PEW/BANG……

So you are probably wondering how it got to this point. Well, it all started when I was at home watching tv and I saw this guy robbing a bank . He made it seem so easy. So what do you know ? I tried robbing a bank. It was all going so well until I got to the vault. There were guards with guns outside. I took them out just like I planned. I got in and grabbed money but it was heavier then I expected….

Bang/Pew! I was shot…                                     Well, I am going throw that plan away….

2 thoughts on “Week 6 Robbery By Ciarán”

  1. Hi Ciarán,
    Great story! Heist stories are always exciting and this is no exception. I especially liked the way you started the story. Starting with dialogue and onomatopoeia made instantly wonder what was happening and drew me in- well done! Keep up the good work.
    Michael (Team 100wc), Coventry, UK

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